Holy Shit your scatter-brained!
your story has no beginning, middle OR end!
you should try and explain a little better, maybe follow the:
and where model.
thats a good start.
"I see what the owls see, curse you into paralysis, drinking blood from the chalice, with Aleister Crowley. I feel no guilt for the blood that got spilled, fuck thou shall not kill, do what thou wilt!" -Necro